Construction- A2 Media Video- 'Mamma Knows Best' Second Draft

This is my second draft edit of my A2 Media Video 'Mamma Knows Best'

Unfortunately when transferring the video to YouTube even in its highest quality setting I seem to lose the HD effect and I am left with a fuzzy video, this upsets me as my video is crystal clear on the editing software. It also seems to push some bits out of sync after seeing this in my draft I tried to change this but it still seems to occur on YouTube.

From my first draft I added auto contrast and fast colour corrector to most of my shots to make the scenes brighter and clearer I think this has defiantly improved my video and the difference can be seen between the two videos quite clearly.

I like this edit but I am going to ask peoples opinion and try and adapt my video slightly in the time I have left.

Ebony: I liked the style and the different edits, if you have time I think you should move the slicked back hair clip further on so it isnt such a surprise later on in the video as it looks a bit out of place.

Sam: The lighting change that you have done makes it look so much better, it makes Charlotte stick out which is great as her perofomance is awesome!! I still would have liked to see the garden shots change to a coloured brick wall, however I do understand under your time constraints that this was not accessable for you and what you have done in the time you have had since losing your original performer is great.

Mr Turner: I like the Hair back shot and think it should be seen earlier on, the video looks better since you have contolled the lighting better and removed the milky film that could be seen in some of your original shots.