Construction-Rough Draft

I watched my video and had this to say about it

• When I have added it to YouTube the sync seems to have slightly altered which wasn't like this in Adobe Premier Pro so I need to address this
• There are several sections where lighting is an issue and that needs to be addressed.

I  also asked three people to watch and comment on my video, I asked people from all different backgrounds

Sam Milne-Studied Drama and Media
Charlotte is perfect for the video, her costume and appearance all round looks great!! Sync is a 

little bit out in some parts but not much at all. Some of the shots are a little dark but colour 

enhance on a programme will make it brighter maybe and add a bit more colour for the song! 

The shots with the powder paint and mirror are IMMENSE! but the shots outside in the garden 

look a little out of place so maybe a brick wall with loads of colour on it would look more the 

part! Overall its awesome and the concept is easy to understand and entertaining!! :)

Charlotte-Studies Drama and my performer

I think that there are section of lip syncing needs to be improved and there is a difference in the 

lighting in several of the outdoor scenes so i think these need to be improved, but I do love the
several of the edits, especially the backwards throwing with the powder paint.

Sam- Music fan but no background in Drama or Media

I liked the feel of the video, I could see that at some points the lips seemed out of sync to the lyrics and some shots looked a lot lighter than others and some appeared to have a film over them but apart from that it was great, fun and energetic I enjoyed watching it.

I also received this E-mail from one of my teachers.

I worked on may of these aspects in order to achieve a better final edit